Rough Cut 1

Below is the first rough cut for our music video, as it was a first draft, there were still some improvements to be made so we received feedback for us to work on in order to create a rough cut 2.



Feedback Given

Lovely narrative

Feel it may need a little more performance in there

At the old person section the jump from kids to performance is slightly odd

It would be nice for the older man to sing the song, so it connects a little more with the young man

Try having the memories/future in black and white to see if it adds anything?

Maybe end with a photo of them together?

A few jumpy shots and the bit with the remote control is a bit too slow

Erin Parkhurst