Using the feedback from our rough cut 1, we improved and developed our music video before showing it again to the teacher to gain more feedback in order to make our video as best as possible.
Feedback
- I like the repeated pans from left to right
- The piano bit don't convince me- doesn't look like he's playing in time to the song
- You can see the fire exit in the background in one of the performance shots
- He finishes playing the piano before the music stops
- Different photo at the end would be nice
- Add clip of old man singing
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